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Excellent work. The subbass mastering is incredibly skillful. All the same, the top end needs a rework, esp. the arp. Kill the bitcrush or whatever you slapped on there, because it needs a resonant highpass and valve distortion instead. For when you churn out the full song, I suggest a chorus-verse form with long organ pads and minor/sus4 key changes. Toodeloo xKore!