You had a great opening, but the end was just...
You needed to work on your ending. If you resubmit this after fixing the end, itll be great.
You had a great opening, but the end was just...
You needed to work on your ending. If you resubmit this after fixing the end, itll be great.
Stop with the sticks.
They're immature and tasteless. It just shows an artist who has no creativity or imagination. Considering this, maybe they're perfect for you.
sry
Sry buddy, it started well, but in the end it was ruined!
1/5!