Pretty good for a new Crew. owait, MAFIA. lOl.
Well, since im such a nice guy, lets get this over with.
~Good~:Catchy music
Fluid animation
Pretty good concept
~Not so Good~: Graphics
Kind of Uncreative
Not completed
This isnt anything you cannot fix. I see you as a great animator, and you have plenty of potential later on. Keep up what your doing, maybe work on your artwork a little, and keep it up. I like where your work is going.
Best regards, Martini 92
Thanks for your input on this your right it wasint finnished and for that were sorry but we are going to make it longer till the song ends,again thanks.
~RampageClock~
Suprisingly Great
-GOOD-
This was a big change from your guys last movie. Your last one was gloomy and shit but this is happy and fun. I loved the graphics and how everything was bouncing. The artwork was good and I loved the backgrounds. The music was great and went with the flash.
-BAD-
Well I was watching this nfun flash and all of a sudden it ended... FINISH IT!
-OVERALL-
I love it but make sure to finish it.
~Review Request Club~
Thanks for your honest review yes it is unfinnished and It will be done dont worrie sorry for the short ending on this.
~RampageClock~
Great!
Although it's a short animation, it's done really well. The artwork is very impressive and i think you've really achieved something here. I like the fact that your flowers and grass looked as if they were inflatable, that really gave it a nice touch. The music however, not my personal favourite, S Club 7 :P Still, you made it decent quality which is more than i can say for a lot of submissions that get past the portal. I think you should re-submit this with more, which is what i think you're going to do already so that's good.
Well done! :)
Thanks Stagnant The artwork and movements were all thanks to RaspberrySun I just help with the odds and ends of it.
Next one that I'll re submit will be full Version and wont cut off Like this and the part2 and Im looking forward to hear your review on out next one.
~RampageSun~
SunMafia?Sure,why not.
Why not have another CC rip-off? The portal is full of unoriginal teams,crews,syndicates,and alliances.So really,what's one more?Any way,the artwork was good,except for the flames.Also the song was funny in an ironic way,whether or not it was inended to be.Just some thoughts and observations,so don't get too upset about them.For what it's worth,good luck.
The basis of it was bad, but...
I'm not too interested in insperationl videos, so I was tempted to give this a zero, but you oviously put alot of work into it. THe graphics were great, execpt for the flowers and the fire in space. It ended kind of suddeny though. You and your friends are pretty good but I think you need to work on some better ideas for the animation. But you did pretty good and I respect the effort that went into this.
wow thank you!,Yes the Movie cut short by mistake and will correct it if not we will try to make a better and longer animation.
Thank you for the complements my friend and also happy Holidays to you Evil-Bucket.
~RampageClock~