this is ok if its your very very first
-Bad points
1 Its noth cald voice ACTING for nothing try pretending if its real, would you stil talk on that voice ? Anny way youl get the hang of it.
2 It was poorly animated, work harder try to find your own stile.
3 ...
-Good points
1 Your practicing for avry second you animate
2 uh... umm... whel I don't knuw fill this in yourself ...
well* know* learn to spell before you leave a review damnit!!!
Yes, it is.
I sense room for improvement. For instance the sound makes me wanna gouge my eardrums out, and the graphics are stunningly horrible.
There are plenty of other things to do when you are bored. Like giving cs bots names of the teachers and kill them.
If you do persist in submitting things to my beloved newgrounds, please make an effort to make it good. If not you can just...something...