Not bad!
Well well! I'm not really into clock things, but I really like the animation you did =)
Congratz, keep working ^^
Reviews for "Winter Wonderland?"
SalmonBerryClock responds:
alright, I guess I will keep working. Here I thought I could stop :(
just kidding
It was alright
Nice drawings, I liked the way the characters moved by what they where saying. It would have been better on the audio style of it if you would have used a computer mic. Pretty good though, just put a little more work into it.
SalmonBerryClock responds:
alright, thanks for the tips
This makes poop look good.
.. You draw pretty good.. But you don't put that talent into good use.
Try making an actual flash movie. By this I mean, Longer and has an actual story. Try harder next time ^_^
Grade Level:
B-
SalmonBerryClock responds:
Alright, I can work with that. Thanks for the advice.
Poop does look good.
That was lame. You can draw, but it was so boring. and there was no style. you just plop everything into the scene. end of story. i couldnt even hear the words properly at all. 1 for humor was for the part where you inserted the audience laugh audio. Haha.
SalmonBerryClock responds:
I..... don't have a laugh track...... but thanks for the comments.
Good, But could be better.
I liked it but I definatly see room for improvement,
- Maybe draw the clocks alot better.
- Make it longer.
- Add a few more jokes.
- But overall it was funny and a good attempt.
SalmonBerryClock responds:
alright, cool. I'm working much harder on the next one. In the meantime, I suggest you watch my first submission, probably my best.