good
~review~
It was pretty good. The sound and voice acting was good. But i think you missed your biggest goal, humor. To me it just wasn't that funny. The brsuhwork was very lacking compared to the pencil tool art. The lip syncing didn't really go completely with the voice acting, the wrong mouth movement often was put in. I like your art style it is very cool.
~good points~
Very long
Solid graphics
Good voice acting
Good art style
~things to improve on~
Try a little harder when using the brush
Correct the lip syncing more next time.
try to connect to everyone with the humor.