Boring
Sorry, but I got bored until the middle of the movie. :|
Boring
Sorry, but I got bored until the middle of the movie. :|
Understandable. I noticed this movie had some dull moments. I didn't pace this properly.
Eh....
I can see the nice point your trying to make but the moral is just to forced and sudden. And the humor is ill timed and not funny : \ better luck next time.
Good
The graphics were prety good, The sound was great, but I think there could've been more violence and humor :-P
Nice
Nice flash, you got your name wrong in the credits tho.
Whoah. Missed that. Thanks. I'll update that later.
good
~review~
It was pretty good. The sound and voice acting was good. But i think you missed your biggest goal, humor. To me it just wasn't that funny. The brsuhwork was very lacking compared to the pencil tool art. The lip syncing didn't really go completely with the voice acting, the wrong mouth movement often was put in. I like your art style it is very cool.
~good points~
Very long
Solid graphics
Good voice acting
Good art style
~things to improve on~
Try a little harder when using the brush
Correct the lip syncing more next time.
try to connect to everyone with the humor.