Nice, but
No I know that you intended to make it end like that. But it was the biggest let of in your flash, just wait until you have the second part or something =S
Reviews for "Stawell's broke!"
It's okay.
Bad Things.
1) when the Starwell is sitting on the couch, the couch is completly to the side and Starwell is in 3/4 view..
2) also, you misspelled Starwell in the title when you submitted it to NG.
3) pretty gay ending. it's like, "So just remember, if you light a smoke, you'll choke, so don't smoke ^_^" or, "Just don't spend more than you make" ..
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Good Things.
1) the story started out good
2) the characters are unique
3) although Chuck Norris is overused, it was a bit funny how you used him in this flash. "kicking debt in the crotch"
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So mate, to wrap it up, just work on these things, and you'll end up fine.
cheers,
Kostya
Not again..
I really don't like this series, you try and teach a lesson at the end of every episode.
What's the point?I was happy when you killed off starwell and hinted at starting a new project but now I'm just disappointed.
nice stuff dude!
if u havent already done so, make one of him getting drunk or something like that! he he! that would be funny!! peace!!
Great series
I love watching the Starwell series, I thought he was killed though and you were going to start on a new project. But anyway, it's a great short, keep up the good work!