Really great graphics... some of the best.
Very nice graphics, perfeict length. Just very nice very very nice. When I looked at the "Janitor massacre" I was really hopeing to see the janitor kill every one or some thing... i was disipointed. well any ways great work waiting for next one.
Good, if too short
Absolutely the most gorgeous flash animation ever. Period. It was really short though, especially for that file size, but you know where the extra time went...
very good & creative
i liked the way you animated real-life people moving, animated over that, & put on the character's head. 4/5
yeah motion capture is a good use to get the movement as close i can to the real thing, just envolves using a camcorder to do it with
I'm disappointed...
Where was my massacre? :-(
Otherwise a well put together flash, twas a treat for the eyes.
dont panic mate, janitor 3 is a massacre, involvign swords guns knives grenades and anything else sadistic you can fink of
I don't get it
Please don't take this the wrong way, but that was a very poorly conceptualized Flash. I did like some of the obviously traced and reused running sequences with the bizzare pasted on heads. I also thought that the gloopy water effect was impressive. Overall, however, I found this to be extremely disjointed.
For one, the music goes berzerk between action sequences. The songs come to a complete halt and start up without warning. It's a pretty jarring effect, but if it was an intentional design issue I urge you change it.
The backgrounds really need to be done directly in flash as opposed to being imported JPGs. The reason I say this is because the movie is gargantuan in size for as long as it lasts. 10 megs??? around 2 minutes??? Unacceptable! I know you probably like the nice photoshop textures, but I really can't justify anything that causes to file size to swell so needlesly. And your lines are thick to the point of being distracting.
Lastly... what the hell is even going on with the title? There are some space cadet kids running through the halls and a guy cleaning what appears to be chicken broth off of a toilet. I can't fathom how this got the name "Janitor Massacre". It just makes no sense.
Critisisms aside, It had a cool look to it and I think it would be worth continuing. Maybe do up some storyboards beforehand, it couldn't hurt.
i get ur point and i kind of didnt get along with the storyboards in the first place but the new toon is a massacre and will be here soon, until i get a flash compressor i cant really get the files smaller, i'll see what i can do