Cool
Improve
Npt really a lot but there could be a sound when the snowball makes contac (like a splat or something)
Cool flash (nice preloader)
4/5
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Jimtopia responds:
Yeah, well I wanted to make sure the music could be heard, but thx for ur suggestion.
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^^Good Points^^
This was a good movie by you. Even the preloader was pretty clever. So far the best I've seen from you graphically. You had animations throughout, even subtle stuff. The music was refreshing, and the storyline had some humor in it, which made this more fun to play.
^^Needs Improving^^
Needs some more sound effects. If there were any, I didn't hear them because of the music.
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Jimtopia responds:
Yes well, I don't really like this cartoon, but I'm glad you did, thx for the review.
nice one
that was a pretty cool snowball animation. i think the tank near the ending of this one was a little bit overkill, but it was funny. i liked the graphics in this one, nice audio, cool characters, decent snowball fighting and it offered some cool entertainment.
nice work.
Jimtopia responds:
Alright, well thx for your review! Glad you liked it!
Interesting
I like it. The animation quality isn't the best, but it's still good. Try to have more creative colors and more detailed characters. And if you're going to do gradients, try to do it as subtle as possible. The storyline was overall good, but it was kind of hard to tell what was going on. There should be more sound effects, without background music. I mean, the song was good, but next time add sound effects with the music, and if you can't hear it, then you should just remove the music entirely. I know you can do better if you tried.
Jimtopia responds:
Well, thx for a detailed review. Well, I tried to make the gradient's subtle, but it's hard to hide it when everything else is white! (lol) anyway, well thx for taking the time to review!
I enjoyed it.
As mentioned before, I don't like your thin-black-outline style.
Also, I hate auto-starts.
You do have some well-expressed expressions, though you could have their eyes widen in fear as the tank comes or whatever.
The tank - what was that meant o do? Melt the snow? Shoot snow-balls? Could have been some added humour to show that effect before it ended.
The font was fairly well picked and everything went well with the music. It did have a faily jolly theme and I liked the way it kept going at a fast pace.
I enjoyed it.
Jimtopia responds:
Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it!