It was alright
It was kind of choppy when I saw it, but I still rated you well, I liked what I saw, but just keep working on it, and you'll get better. All I can say is fairly cliche': work on your art design, scene selection would be great, but it amused me, plus I just blammed a sucky piece of crap movie, and yours was worlds better. Just keep practising, keep making movies, and keep trying to make it better each time. Good luck.