Well, its good.
Well animated, and it is a good idea for a series. But what looks like you have good english in the description, and I'm asuming you wrote the sub titles, perhaps you could do an english version... maybe. Its up to you. I'd probably like it more if I didn't have to read all the sub titles, because I may miss a visual joke or something reading. So think about it. That'd be quite cool for a series and i'd vote five as long as its funny, from what I can make out, it is, and if it were in english. But other than that, you're a really good animator and I like your style, keep it up!