Lousy poem
If you're going to do a flash movie that entirely depends on a poem, then at least have the sense to use proper meter. The writing was awkward at best.
Lousy poem
If you're going to do a flash movie that entirely depends on a poem, then at least have the sense to use proper meter. The writing was awkward at best.
Well, instead of just saying it was awkward you could have give me some ideas to improve it. tz. -_-