Reviews for SRM and the Janitors

[Coop]

Much improved!

Well, this was easily the biggest step in your young animating career, by the way that things progressed - the sound was better the animation had come along so much and yet I still felt like we lost something from Socially Retarded Man along the way. Perhaps he gained intelligence and it made him kind of scary. I like the idea with the marshmallows and so forth, but when he stopped things and made it like a public service announcement, it seemed slightly wrong.

Awesome work on the drawing front, as everything is so smooth now and even the janitor looked well drawn, despite the fact that you made him as scruffy as you dare. I think that this certainly meant that you were going to create better looking flash in the future.

Oh well, on to 2007 and I'll see for sure that you've fulfilled on this potential that you've shown.

[Review Request Club]

Battosai810 responds:

It's kinda funny to think that this came out the same month as SRM and Da Cousins - the jump between visual and sound quality is incredible. This cartoon still has iffy sound and the visuals are nowhere near up to snuff for me now, but it looked great at the time.

I'm glad you enjoyed this cartoon and are noticing a progression. Although SRM is giving a bit of a PSA near the end of this, he's still off mark - I wouldn't by any stretch of the imagination call janitors the darlings of our country. I like to think that it's a natural progression from being completely crazy and stupid to just being off target in most of his assumptions.

Thanks for watching!

[Lil0r]

well done

the graphics were nice and simple, which worked well. now go make something even better.

Battosai810 responds:

done and done!
thanks