meh, not bad
This was pretty ok. You should probably expand on the idea, however. The animation was pretty good (as far as stick figures go). Hmmm... I would baisically expand your ideas into longer flash, and put a touch more violence, it is a stick movie after all ;)
Anyways, I hope this sorta helped.
This series is intended to be anti-violence and porn. We ought to have equally great movies WITHOUT the violence, or we'll all become psychopaths.
Thanks DEMON5007!
joy to watch
Watched the flash to see how you used the tune, which I love.
The walking cycle was fairly good.
The first background was almost beautiful. I felt the green you used could have been better, but other than that the colours seemed perfect and I loved the shapes - the windmill, the trees and whatnot. If it were painted in, it could almost be a bg for one of the classic Hanna Barbera cartoons.
The spacecraft was also nicely drawn.
When we got to the ending, I felt really bad for the aliens.
I did feel the 'beaming up' distortion looked a bit cheap - would've been better maybe to just have them move up without scaling and maybe use a mask so they aren't visible behind the 'glass'.
Also, the city could have had some nicer colours maybe.
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Cool movie. A joy to watch with some fun touches. I was disappointed with the ending though - I was hoping it'd go on longer - but I'm glad you've got a sequel.
Thanks Bezman, but it's getting really old and... lame. See my other submission for a 100x pwning better one.
This is a good flash
I don't know why people rate it down like that.
Thanks! They do that probably because they've never heard of me and it's a stick flash. >.>
hmmmmm...
hard chioce. it wasnt crap, but it wasnt that good ethir. yes i liked it and i gave it a vote of 4.
Thanks El-Jameo, and please vote and review TWS ch.2. I'd like to see what you think!
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^^Good Points^^
Definitely a very colorful movie. I say that because of the backgrounds, which I thought were very cooly done. The animations looked very good, you obviously know what you are doing, and you got a little creative with this in the storyline.
^^Needs Improving^^
I think perhaps you were a little too obvious in displaying your animating skills. For example, in the beginning, the guy walks very slowly, which gives me the impression that you are just trying to show us your good walking animation rather than a movie.
Eh... that was because in the beginning he walked too fast for you to catch up on what was going on, and I lengthened it. Unfortunately , it looks like I lengthened in a little TOO much, eh? :-)