potential.
you sir, have amazing potential with your musical abilities. i don't think this sounds like porn music at all.... i couldn't "get down" to this. but anyway your music inspires me and i love doing drum covers on your music. don't worry i don't put any of my music up, i always delete everything i make. gotta be a perfectionist.
Beautiful idea, nicely done so far
Loved "Limbo", loving this one.
Gotta say, I rarely go to the audio portal so I got you thanks to Ansel & his Binary, which was great, and I played it several times because of its particular music.
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Nicely protrayed desire
I love who you put a more primal feel to Lust, it is something I never would of thought about. The song has a very enticing feel to it, especially at the end where it slowly comes to a stop oddly enough. And like I said last time, can't wait for the whole thing.
Interesting.
If you don't mind some suggestions, lust is about greed and adrenaline. To simulate that desire it has to drive, become faster, progress. To help this, maybe a rapid, yet faint, shaker (more rapid then the one you have) in the background. Then you could filter some breathing as I've seen many artist do before.
The bongos are in the right place, and should keep that steady tempo, but perhaps they could be a little more ghostly and tantalizing, which could use some reverb or such.
I enjoyed the pacing, though, and the melodies are very interesting and mesh greatly. With some work this could be quite a culmination, something I wouldn't mind on a long drive or an art session.
With all this, I think it finally needs a climax (suggestive of the subject) to disorient and push it into the next section. I'll look out for this in the future!
thanks for the constructive critism after listening to it again i do agree it needs a climax but i think i was getting a bit frustrated with the song hope u like the next pt gluttony
ehh,,hate to break it to you
but it still kinda sounds like a porn. don get me worng is a great addition definetly worth looking into if your in the mood to do touch up. if i could make a suggestion though try listening to a few slow arabic songs. it sounds to me that this was an attempt at that