Man...
You clean up the intro and I would bow at your feet. I think more cowbell. but in all seriousness you should try changing the pitch of your guitars between 1:23 and 1:24, raise 'em up and it shall be epic! Fantastic otherwise, oh and listen to "Power Glove"'s "Power, Wisdom, Courage" its gnarly. Keep up the great work! -LHB