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Reviews for "The American Jerk"

Very professional and good

You obviously put tons of work into this. The quality of the animation and graphics were great. Like the last reviewer said, the synching took away from it. I do however realize that you synched it correctly and it was just getting major slowdown. I put the quality on Low and it didn't help at all, so I'm not sure what's making it run so slow. I just wish I could view it at the correct speed. Overall great flash! Hitler was my favorite character.

Good, but could be great.

You have a good idea going here, but what you really need to do is fix your audio synchronization. The story was good, and the dialogue was well written, but the lip synching was so far off, it really detracted from the overall piece. Also, it would help if the dialogue moved faster, as well. Even though I liked the animation, I was almost ready to just stop watching it because the pace was so slow I was getting bored.

My advice would be to go back and re-record the dialogue at a faster pace, then synchronize it better with the animation, then resubmit.

Royaledis responds:

I really like your comments on the pacing of the dialogue. I always notice that my movies are a bit slow and can't really tell why. It's the dialogue!

In the recording booth it always seems I'm talking too fast, but I guess I have to remember that animation audio needs to be greatly exaggerated.

Thanks for the comments and I'm def. gonna be thinking about that next time.

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AHH! Great but one major issue.

Great movie - Great graphics, cool idea, nice style, BUT ONE HUGE ISSUE!

The lip syncing was so off it wasn't even funny! If it had been on track, this surely would have made the front page! Fix that, and all will be well though.

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