cool one
that was a pretty cool animation. the sketches in this one were quite nice and well-drawn. i think that more colour would've been nicer for this one though and maybe some different audio, but the audio was alright and it suited the scenes in this one. it was also quite amusing as well... many the character was funny, not so much the animation.
overall, it was a cool one, i liked this one.
Fun...
Pretty good, I liked the style of this cartoon, and I loved the expressions on his face. The music was good too, pretty simple, but good. Please use colours and better lines next time, it looks hand drawn while you were shaking, it's a great style, but I think you should try a new one.
really well drawn
i think this was the first sketchy movie i have seen which was really hilarious. the animation was nice and fluid. Really well done...and there was no need for color since it really looked good without color....good work!!!
Well done, keep going
The style *is* a lot like John Kricfalusi's, but that isn't bad. Model yourself after the greats! You are already starting to break away from his work anyway, I can see that. Music was fine, next time try for more drawings to get a higher framecount; that will help you get down comic timing (he spent a little too long on the roller skate).
BTW thank you for keeping this light-hearted and not going for some misogynistic zinger at the end like ROBO3000.
Seems fine to me
Sort of like a screen test for a real cartoon. Still, the animation is cool, even if the framerate is really, really low. Regardless, good work.