So-so
Alright, could be alot better though, eg. Maybe a slightly better storyline. I liked the ereference to Borat, nicely put in and it made me laugh abit, but if you made it a bit longer, and thought of a better storyline, then, combined with the good graphics already there, i think you'd be onto a winner.
Mhm.
"I'm a pimp November 14, 2006
Reviewed by: untitled
Overall Score: 10
I had sexytime with one of my 7th grade teachers because I was growing facial hair already. She was a total babe! I'm glad I kept that relationship secret."
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Are you sure you aren't mixing a teacher saying "Good job on your homework!" with "I want to fuck you"?
Seems like the type of thing someone who proclaims their seventh grade teacher a babe and themselves a pimp, would make a common error of.
Not bad.
First off congrats on front page. It just reminds me of an innocent day of junior high, with innocent kids just all trying to be liked (maybe all innocent except the Borat type dude lol.) But yeah some of your movie lacked originality, and I appreciate the fact you tried to make a quick laugh by inserting a Borat theme in your movie, right about when the movie Borat just hit theatres.
Borat looks like a cheezy film anyhow. But I will say you can make a movie, nice graphics, cast and credits, nice opening and closing guitar theme, you put flash to a decent use, you just need to work on the storyline a little bit is all, then you'll be close to top notch. I like the school yard theme, innocent like I said above, I personally don't see much of this kind of material on front page anymore, just random weird stuff, so seeing a bit of mildness on front page is alright.
7 overall score.
4/5 voting panel score.
xVegetAx NG Portal Lieutenant.
Right...
you just wanted to use Borat in your flash. Am I right?
potental for something awesome.
This was fairly short, and actually it has alot going for it. great editing of the sound and music, and a pretty unique concept. I wish it was longer, so i can see more of this middleschool storyline. The Borat thing was a little to unoriginal, but atleast it wasn't like stomach cringingly lame.
The peewee herman laugh cracked me up.
The animation, was simple, but it had the important elements of it. For instance, instead of it looking like just two frames of hair clipping, it looked like he was clipping his hair.
All in all it was way above average, like a C+. I see potental in this, and you, that if you keep at it something really cool will pop up. In the least this level of animation is better than alot of the other crap that gets submitted daily to newgrounds. Good Job! Gold Star!