not bad
i like the style. i think you have a lot of potential,
but i found it a little dry.
work in some more original jokes, and some smooth plot and you'll be good to go.
overall, not bad at all!
not bad
i like the style. i think you have a lot of potential,
but i found it a little dry.
work in some more original jokes, and some smooth plot and you'll be good to go.
overall, not bad at all!
So-so
Alright, could be alot better though, eg. Maybe a slightly better storyline. I liked the ereference to Borat, nicely put in and it made me laugh abit, but if you made it a bit longer, and thought of a better storyline, then, combined with the good graphics already there, i think you'd be onto a winner.
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The graphics were great, good idea too. It was pretty funny, but the sound quality wasn't that good. That was still a great animation, I just think you need to work on smoothing your animation though. And when he cuts his hair, maybe you can work on making it so on a frame, it has a line there and part is cut off. They're the small things which can get high scores.
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1. Graphics were good.
2. Good idea.
3. It was kinda funny.
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1. When they moved they're bodies, it wasn't that smooth.
2. The sound quality was pretty bad.
((( ShortMonkey )))
heh. not bad
nice flash you have here freind =) the animation was good, vioce acting was perfect. I enjoyed this
4/5 - pioneer
Alirght
Its good that your not ashamed of wanting a girlfriend so bad that you made a flash about it....good job ;)