Ahh.
The ol' Dock song. i've done a few covers of this in my time on the AP. The chord pattern in the B section was a bit wrong, try listning to some midis or play the game to get the feel of it.
One thing that sort of killed it was the techno-ish 'drum' that hit at the start of every bar. This was fair enough, but should have been introduced AFTER the drums started, as it was too heavy for the early part of the song.