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+++ Using glitches like that intentionally is something I hadn't seen done before.
+++ Fits into the flow well and is well produced (the glitches, I mean). I specially liked the interpretive dance and the cate repeat.
+ The horrible creatures are kinda nicely drawn
--- A lot of ugliness. I accept that maybe you tried to make it look ugly, but the tweening head, for example, just looks cheap as does the syrup thing.
-- No real message.
-- I didn't find it funny.
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Loved how you used the visual glitching, but it's not really used for any great purpose here.
I'd love to see these visual glitches maybe incorporated into something, in the style that Negativland do with aural glitches.