not bad but it just didn't sit right with me
for one thing the joke while not offencive to me wasn't at all funney eather. for another I could recognize almost every single sound efect from WC3 banshee death, footman defend, steam tank, ect. (ya I know this stuff I played WC3 for like 2 years or somthing adicted) for another it was just cut short. it might have bean intesting but it's like a story that just got to a party where it begins to get past the set up and then cuts off.
What's with the sound?
The sound really came through poorly. Might want to check that. Its really bad.
The scene flow well thought through. Even without the sound I could imagine the plot and its possibilities. I am curious to how the story will continue. Why was she attacked? Could this be love? Will the two trash-talking "bad boys" help her?
The mix of animation styles felt a bit out of synch, sometimes smooth, sometimes unfinished. Unless you want to use this contrast to affect the mood of the scenes?
Finally is a scathing comment about the content. If you can't handle it, don't read on... The joke was in very poor taste. Could have been a joke on anything, why must two white guys slam blacks and then the fallen woman? If you're trying to add to character development, then it's out of character that these two would help the "whore". What, these are two guys who drive around talking shit, yet are really warm, soft and fuzzy inside? What nice, helpful boys! From this I imagine the follow-up to the last scene will be that he'll say to the just recovered and still weak woman; "Damn! You really ARE a weak, UGLY whore! I think I love you!" Think this through guys. It doesn't come off well as is.