Great Start, can't wait to see more.
This is acctually an interesting idea. What serial killers (real or cinematic) do together in thier spare time. Kinda cool. Eh I'll agree with some people the humor could be dry in sections, but a good start. I can't wait to see more.
P.S. For everyone else. Ed Gein is actually considered a serial killer, yea he only killed 2 women, but the crimes were so grotesque and appalling that they have been remembered in America for over 40 years. Thus he has been dubbed a serial killer. Also for the fact that if he hadn't been caught his mentality strongly suggests that he would have pursued more. (thank you forensic psychology class!)