not bad one
it was an alright animation... though it really needed audio in some sort or another. the idea behind it was cool though could've had a little more detail to it.
overall, it was an alright animation, but it really needs sound.
Reviews for "Mr.Kiwi's Story"
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^^Good Points^^
Not a bad movie, especially for your first. The storyline was cute, I liked it. Your characters are unique and the storyline was unique and explained well also.
^^Needs Improving^^
As you said, the animations are really quite crude. I can deal with that, but my major problem about this is that it was pretty boring. The storyline seemed to drag on forever and I had to force myself to watch to the end. The lack of sound doesn't help your situation either. You definitely need to add sound.
omnimike responds:
Thanks for the constructive comment, I agree the pace can be improved and adding sound and music would help, I'll work on those if time permit :)
I love the idea
I just wished there was some sound, other than that, it was sweet.
Make one with sound. If this was your first, then great job.
Sincerely,
Agent -47-
omnimike responds:
Thank you for the positive comment, now that I've seen more works from other clips posted here I guess I'll try to find some good music clips for it :)
W-O-W...
That was so funny but sweet, if this gets blammed then the people who blammed it suck.
omnimike responds:
Thanks for the nice comment! I'm happy to hear that someone appreciate it :)
FIRST ANIMATION!!!!
if that really was your first WOW, and sound would be good
but other than that it was good
omnimike responds:
Thanks, yeah I agree having sound would be nice, I'll try to borrow some music suitable for the clip since I can't compose myself.