Needs Work.
Why submit things before they are done is a question I ask everyone who does it. Its nice still, but it could be better, like better letters in the menu. Here are a few things you need...
1) Finish the thing before you submit it, dont just update, its better to get a great score strait away, than work on it slowly.
2) Sprites, not a good thing really. You have to have very good motion, and an absolutely aewsome idea if you want to go far with sprites. See what your doing with your sprites, get them, then look at them, and make a drawing of your own character and use that like you use sprites, its better!!
3) This is me personally. I like long messages before the movie, as you diodnt have much info about the game, and I didnt know the full controls or anything, so there ya go!
Take notice of this, it will help!!