Nice.
Kind of stupid, but it looked great. I liked the animation and directing.
Reviews for ".Pollution."
Work it out to a Story...
...because I like the Background very well. If you dont - then I will do! ;)
About the Flash - some very damn nice Ideas. And I am not only talkin about the Story or Design. I think of how you made those Scene where the camera closes up on the character and the Sword gets blurr. Or when you can see the mirror of the Enemys at the Blade - or the Ending. Especially the ending. now - THIS is Art - not just very good-looking.
But away from that there are still things to improve - the Face of the Character was abit strange. He was no Beauty. Reduce the Mouth-part, and make the "round Part" of the head, where the brain is, bigger. Also increase the volume of the Hair. Try it out - even if you think youll make the hair just way too voluminous and it will look unrealistic, youll be surprised - it may wont!
Also there are some other things. But that would be trying to reach perfection. And thus is un-avoidable leading into Failure. Just look at "Fallen Angel". This flash was the reason why I joined the flashcommunity one or two years ago. But since then there was no more lifesign from Fallen Angel. Very Sad.
So just keep your style and improove the Details
sweet animation i love it..
cool i like the animation alot. i am in aww of you animation...hehehe.. not the best ive seen you do but good. i was wondering tho? how do you get your play button on the movie to work?eamail me or send message through newgrounds. pyro1230@hotmail
OVer all its a great movie like it like the sword. like the blood and yeah u get the point...8/10
just woundering why
i really liked this flash but i was woundering why the sword was always clean after every kill?
Great animation!
But doesn't make any sense...