Reviews for The Tutorial Collab '06

[GAMECUBICLE]

Nice tutorial collab

This was pretty nice. Artists collaborating to bring a good tutorial.
But it did let me down a bit.
First off... the graphics...:
The layout just isn't working that well... you should have thought about it a bit more.
The layout does represent the feel of the tutorial good though.
But still pretty descent, just not that great.

About the tutorial itself:
A lot of subjects! Great it has a lot of Actionscript, since that was the one thing i didnt have a lot of in ultimate tutorial 2. So that is probably why a lot of people might go using this tutorial.
You might explain everything a bit more in depth though.
But good job on the actionscript parts :)

A few more things;
Some of the sections felt kinda rushed... like swift 3d... i mean c'mon... only bout 5 pages on that? i doubt anybody learned swift 3d because of it.
Seems like you were trying more to focus on flash (which is not a bad thing though, but if you add a swift 3d, fruity loops, etc.. section, make it worth it... else just leave it out of there)

Overall a good tutorial, despirte a few cons. But still one of the best tutorials newgrounds has to offer.
Good job all.

4/5

Depredation responds:

Wow, some helpful stuff there. It's great to have a good review from the best tut writer on NG :D.

I had to make the layout simple, but i agree, it's flawed. I will work harder on a perfect layout next time and plan around the extras/bonuses. Instead of changing them at the last minute.

The swift 3D Section will be added to. I had to release when the author was abset, so he didn't have time to complete them. I do agree though, some tuts are prety tiny :O.

Thank you overall. It's a good review, lots of stuff to improve on :D.

Thanks.

,Ali.

[jpofgs]

nice tutorial

seems well thought out and all that wanted to ask you if it possible to download since i'd like to have it without having to load

Depredation responds:

Yeah, i'll post a link soon. I meant to do that earlier, sorry about that. Give me a day ro so :). Thanks for the review :).

[MrPickles564]

AWSOME!!!!!!!!

wow this helped me tons- I'm just learning Flash and i've been trying to find a good Tut.-so far this is the best.

Depredation responds:

Great, glad it helped. Thank you for the review :).

[TrueDarkness]

Awesomeundo...

Deltas first submission. Awesome, now where's that 3D game that I've heard rumored around too many times ;D

Great job guys, an excellent tutorial, with lots of things I myself should learn. BitmapData tutorials are really amazing, and should help me a lot seeing as how I was too lazy to learn bitmapData from AS: Main because liam blows (joke), but these tutorials might be easier for me to understand. Really nice job guys =)

Depredation responds:

Haha, thansk TD :). Glad you like it. I'm trying to reply to every review. It may take a while :).

Anyway, glad you learnt somthing :). I know i did :D.

Thanks.

,Ali.

[PARAGON-pvp]

Yay! You guys finally finished this!

I remember a while back i helped one of you guys with like a navigator bar or advanced button AS ect. can't remember exactly what it was, but I was really impressed with the layout, I loved it! great job you guys! Good luck in the future!

PARAGON-pvp