I don't do l33t sp33k..fairly ok anyway.
It's a fairly OK film, only thing I am concerned about is why did you use Skies of Arcadia music? It doesn't suit a MMORPG with FF and Halo... : /
Apart from that, the most annoying thing is the use of l33t sp33k, which I just hate so much because I can't read it, so I've had to de-rate your flash.
Good try though, keep showing us more.