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Reviews for "Hello Tomorrow"

You'll be doing amazing things in no time.

So, this is your first full-fledged Flash, so to speak?
Well, it's no something I particularly like, but if what you say is true, then you're someone with great potential. I grasped a kind of metaphor there, too. Cool!
My advice would be to add more detail to your artwork. Detailed shadows, perhaps more complex characters (Which are really al right the way they are. Just a suggestion.), and the use of filters, like blurring, which have some interesting storytrelling effects.

Very Impressive.

If this is indeed your first flash, you're something to keep an eye on. I'm pretty confident in saying that if you keep this up you'll be making a lot of great things. The graphics were very nice and I like the way you highlighted the reds. Typically that's a big cliche but you used it very sparingly here so good job. It had a very unique style, almost old-school disney like. The music went well with what was going on and added to the disney style I was saying.

Overall a very promising start. Next time maybe come up with a plot with actors or something, or make it even more surreal.

awesomeness

it was reall y great, but it didn't look like ur first attemp at flash.

Graphics: were awesome you have very good artwork in flash i guess cause that whole thing in a real life portrait, would probably be in a museum it's so good.

Style: It's one of the most original things i've seen to be honest. every time somethign happens, something different just happens all of a sudden. it's not really my type of flash, (i didn't say not, i said not really)but i like this one a lot and know it will be saved.

Sound: the music went perfect with the animation, but the funny thing is, sometimes the person playing the instrument would hit a wrong note by mistake. and i think the singer sucks.

Violence: not much here, the only real thing violent in this movie is the part where that dinosaur eats the guy. but the part i don't get, is when he finds a pair of wings inside the dinosaur.

Humor: there was no humor in this, but everythign thing else makes up for it.

Not bad.

Not bad at all. Espescially for a first try. We need more people like you actually putting forth some effort. Theres too many stick movies on Newgrounds these days.

SWEET!

Stop lieing! We all know that you must have EXTENSIVE animation experience! Kidding, pretty good for your first attempt. you have some real good talent. can't wait 'til you make another.