You'll be doing amazing things in no time.
So, this is your first full-fledged Flash, so to speak?
Well, it's no something I particularly like, but if what you say is true, then you're someone with great potential. I grasped a kind of metaphor there, too. Cool!
My advice would be to add more detail to your artwork. Detailed shadows, perhaps more complex characters (Which are really al right the way they are. Just a suggestion.), and the use of filters, like blurring, which have some interesting storytrelling effects.