Lol,good poem....
~~OPINION~~
Haha,quite a funny poem you got there.........did you
write it yourself?
~~WAYS TO IMPROVE~~
Add some sound,a comic with sound it's like popcorn with pepsi......
~Extra Comments~
So kids,if you don't want your fat ass cut and throw to the gays,you
better be good children and eat your veggies.....or else...
Till next time man,
~Xiaowu~
Pretty Awkward.
Wow.
All done in verse....and all about a boy who didn't believe in God.
Pretty funny.
Got a funny look from my brother while I was watching it....(was laughing oddly)
No offense....but you're crazy.
Keep up the good work! =P
umm
I dont really get the message. The kid doesnt seem to be tortured any more now than he was then. He doesnt mind the pain because he doesnt believe that it is really happening.
Great!
Great animation and message! nothing you really need to add maybe some sound.....
LMAO funny shit
dude i loved the whole thing xcept u should put some sounds in tho
sall good i had my own music playing :-)