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Parts that should have been animated, were left as frozen as still pictures. It felt as though it was a half hearted effort. Simple things like the power auras could've been done better and it just didn't seem to flow right.
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Parts that should have been animated, were left as frozen as still pictures. It felt as though it was a half hearted effort. Simple things like the power auras could've been done better and it just didn't seem to flow right.
ok ill take note of that
too unoriginal
if your going to use a stolen sound clip at least draw original artwork or if your going to trace stolen artwork, use an original soundclip - that way theres SOME originality to your work. As far as graphics and animation go - don't trace, start off by tracing to learn how to draw a character, then try drawing it by whilst looking at it, and then try drawing it from memory - its a good technique for drawing specific characters or structures. Also try animating at a higher framerate, 30fps is good to animate at but very underrated, at times this seemed it was animated at about 6fps. 0'd, but keep on trying.
thanks for that ill put it in mind..
illegal
sigh
this was Obviously traced, dont deny it. even if it wasnt traced it was not done well,
Its a direct law violation to steal somone elses characters and use them as your own
to top it off you directly copied from the episode
The owners of the rights to DBZ dont care if you make a fanflash ussually but if you directly copy something they will fine the Shit out of you, well im not gna go report you cuz that would be a shithead move but anyways you seem to be a good animator so i guess all i got to say is dont break anymore laws
hmmmmmmmmmm fair enough but i never did claim the characters as my own
not bad...
this was a really good first flash but at not being an original idea it kinda lowered it down... Also i found it to be a bit choppy... but still keep it up ^^
Thanks for the review man
Cya
S-E5000
Nice ;D
This was pretty good for a first flash. Next time you should make something original though. People want to see new material not carbon-copies of stuff they've already seen. Plus, your lip synching could use some work. ;D
your comment has been noted.
Thanks for review
Cya
S-E5000