Cut the camera.
You got some nice stuff going, but the dynamic camera in version 2 made the action too confusing to track.
Reviews for "Black stick madness"
Nice.
*protect*
Very good animation.
hmmmm...
well when I read that it was your first stick movie, I was scared to click it, but when I saw it its actually prety good :P, v1 is better
Okay for a stick flick
It was more well-drawn than a lot of stick flicks I've seen, and the animation was fairly smooth. Of the two versions you could choose from, though, I think the first one (overall panorama shot) was the best. The second was kinda' neat, but it was too close for much of the action to make any sense. Close-up work is a good idea, but maybe not quite as close - something about halfway between the first and second version would probably be good. Good luck! :-)
entertaining
I enjoyed watching this short stick figure battle. The music was good, but it completely drowned out the sound effects. I expected to hear some gunfire and explosions when people where firing guns and throwing missles.
The stick figure battle overall has been done a lot, but that doesn't mean it's bad nor does it mean I don't like it. It just feels like this wasn't anything that stands out amongst the others.