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I may seem a little over critical here, but eh, I am just in that sort of mood. First of all, I do give you props for doing voice acting for your own toon, but there's a down fall here. The dialogue seemed really cheesy, I don't know if that's what you were going for but it didn't work for me. Your cartoon had a very pretentious feel it with all the random swearing, and honestly, you don't sound old enough to be swearing.
The theme, dying in seven days, has been over done, even though it's a parody/or not ... it was a little too cliched.
The animation was simple yet it was effective in means of story telling, so I tip my hat for that.
Keep it up man.