Meh, looked like a ripoff.
First of all, the entire movie looked like a ripoff of Knox's work. Even the style you made your characters was his style. So you get no points for style. However, I do know how hard it is to do decent clay animations. But get your own style please.
And get a preloader. I read the other review, and if you don't have flash, then you really shouldn't be here. ^_^
i tried as hard as i could to not make it seem like a rip-off of Knox's stuff, only the men and the co-co-cola were like Knox. and that was just the beginning-it will get better, i swear.
you got my 5 bro
Hey!! i also make clay animations and i know how hard it is :P
It was nice, but kinda stupid.. (no offence)
here are a few suggestions for your next work!
- Get other voice actors.. or atleasy try harder to change your voice!
- The voice acting was in a GOOD quality! but wasent good, if u kno wut i mean :/
- DONT EVER copy knox!! yes yes i know u didnt try to rip off his work but still the "co co cola" was stupid and its his joke :(
- Think of better jokes :P it's hard but ANYONE can do it!
- More violence please =]
- dont movie the camera so much.. just put CLAY or SUMTHING under it!! its rly anoying when it moves like that :(
- Work harder on the clay guys cuz they dont look well.. I KNOW U CAN DO IT :D
- More charecters,creatures,places and items :P
GET A PRELOADER! ITS SIMPLE JUST DOWNLOAD THE NEWGROUND 1
Thats it :P good luck
Thanks, man!
I am currently working on the claymen and they will be better-still styled like Knox's though.
As to copying knox, i was kinda trying to get ideas, so the stuff will change.
Violence, i'm creating another that will have Knives, Dual Pistols, Shotguns, AKs AND a Mounted Machine Gun! Enough violence?
Creatures-i'm doing a Mario Bros styled one, so i think that's covered.
THE CAMERA: if you read the full notes, you would have seen that I DIDN'T DO THE WOBBLY BITS, my friend did.
i can see what you mean about the voices-i'm from the UK and i'm, like really young.
Also, is there any way to link a preloader to a non-flash movie? I don't want to spend £500 on Flash just so i can use a preloader.
But anyway, thanks for the review and tips!
PS the reason it was stupid was it was really a 'test' to see what i could do-it will get better.