it was ok...
the beginning sucked. and i dont think all that writing was needed and just wasted time...and then the video itself was way too long. and i really dont think anyone actually sat through the hole thing. One big thing you could do is instead of having all that writing in the beginning, just make one sentence that explains the story...cause i didnt read all of that. and then just take out any useless parts becuase it was way to long. but it was ok.