ummm ok
It was alright for a first animation, though it could've been a bit longer overall, and maybe some better audio and graphics. As for those, I would suggest checking out some of the many tutorials to help you with your future flashwork, as well as the audio portal for music as well.
ARH!!!
The whole flash looking really good and i liked the scribble dog idea.
At first I thought this might be a half good flash but then the ending just ruined everything.....
play and replay buttons and the gunshot noise were all good.
next time add some background music aswell as a much better story.......
Thanks for the compliments! :)
It was originally made for a school project and so I didn't spend much time on it, then I got onto Newgrounds and thought I should submit it.
There may be a second with an actual storyline. Any advice or ideas you have would be great.