Did you say SERIES?!?
Did you say "Coming this DECEMBER"?!? Oh man, I can't wait! This looks awesome! You have such an incredible way with atmosphere...the stabs of piano chords, the slowly turning windmills, the rustling grass, all of it gives me the creeps. That weird guy who threw the bucket down the well is especially intriguing, but he wasn't the Shadow himself, was he...? (Come to think of it, what does this series that you're alluding to have to do with the first entry you submitted anyway?)
The one thing I'm not sure of is that I didn't expect Lilium's voice to sound so young and childlike. But wow...I was SO happy to see a new entry from you and now it'll only be a matter of weeks until something even bigger comes along! Oh man, I can't wait...