hmmm...
well, not a terribly bad flash. The first thing I see wrong with it is its file size its ungodly way too big for the length of this thing. My guess is you put two full length songs into this and then just used the stop sounds script to seeminigly merge them. PLZ PLZ PLZ get a music program to cut the music file to the point you want to cut it off at, that way you have a much much smaller file size. The graphics were okay as you actually make some details into it and the casket. Also, this thing is just way to short to matter much, please add to the story and fix the music if you resubmit it.