Umm
I'm usually not critical of the occasional spelling or grammatical mistake, but this flash was rife with them. It really just turned me off of watching anymore of the submission
Reviews for "Between part.2 english"
Not bad, but shouldn't it have had 'Mild Nudity'?
Meeeh, anyway. Pretty nice drawing, and slightly confusing. Maybe I should watch the other ones too... XD
that was cool
i love your style, and definately want to see more of your stuff, but seriously- the part where she was flipping out and then they rode the escalator...i dont know... maybe its just me but i found that a little weird.
idk if its mycpu or the flash.
the music dont work on my comp or sumthing maybe i need better flashplayer... oh well its too long and it slows down in certain areas.
damn thats cool
Looks great, nice fitting music, interesting story, a topless flatchested girl....all things i like.
Only downside is having to take my eyes away from the interesting visuals to read the text.
ALSO...the end and what he says at the end reminds me of Fight Club...may have been the same line.