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WOW great over all and the angel PWND that demon and yea a series would be cool
Reviews for "Angel & Demon"
Very nice
Overall 9
Some will says u got talent, others potential.
I personally say u got both, u have what it takes to be one of the few really popular animators if u continue like this
Graphics 8
It is hand draw after all an that means no auto correction from animation programs, really good
Style 8
Style is important and u bring everything together so easly and fluidity
Sound 6
one thing u need to work on
Violence 6
standard, not to much and not to less just right
Interactivity and humor 0
theres none
peterlow responds:
:D thx... in fact i wish to be on the main page of newgrounds... this is my second flash and it was maid in 1 less than a week. Im triting to get experience from the reviews :) some ppl told my last flash was bad :S... its in newgrounds so u guys can see it
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<Good Points>
Good graphics and choice of music.
<Improvement>
A little more violence, more fighting, and maybe some voiceacting? And do something with the spelling errors. I understand if you aren't american or english or candian or whatevet, I am Norwegian, and it is kinda hard to write english all the time, but if you don't know hos something is spelled, look it up, and if you DO know how it's spelled, then write "you" instead of "u"
<Comments>
This could be really, really good, just do something about the grammar and voicing.
A standard review....
Pretty good, and nice animation.... you say you hand drew all of it? that adds even more depth to the graphics.... and the mucis wasn't too shabby either.... where did you get it?
peterlow responds:
oh i forgot... music is from flashkit.com ...
Another good submission.
I dont know what the other guy was talking about, i didnt notice any problems in any of the video. It all seemed nearly perfect to me. I didn't understand the story to well but either way it was still good. the only problem i had was the music was kind of bad. (and by that i mean it got a lot of static in it unless thats just my speakers.) but i was listening to music before i watched the video and they were fine... so i do think the song you used might slightly be bad. Sorry don't mean for this to be so long, but yah just fix the sound i guess and itd be better.good job.