Decent if not good...
Don't listen to those all negative ones. I liked it. Hope to see the next one.
Reviews for "Sunday Comics & Toons 004"
RSQViper responds:
They'll be hitting NG every Saturday just like the three before this one.
And I don't listen to those negatives if they have nothing to back them up.
Thanks for the review. Hopefully you think it's good, not just decent. =)
A good start...
... but from the few strips I saw you guys need to tighten up your punchlines a bit. There's a little dead air between attempts at gags.
Otherwise it's an original format on NG and I wish you all good luck in keeping up with it.
RSQViper responds:
Thanks. Folks are still learning.
But, it would have been nice if you watched them all then reviewed, not only watched a couple. Now I don't even know what ones you saw. =(
Nice at first
but it got more boring as I went further down the list.
*shrugs* sorry
perhaps if some of you worked on your material-animating, humor and/or timing-you'd get higher scores.
Nice idea though.
RSQViper responds:
It continues to improve each week. There are a lot of new animators in this and they especially are improving.
It can certainly get better and will.
attempting constructive criticism
Before i get started, let me say its a good effort. the fact that you have such limited time to get it together is impressive that this much got done
however, there is still room for much improvement.
now, i know i'm not a flash artist (yet), but after watching all of these i was left somewhat disapointed.
no offense, but i found virtually none of them to be outright funny. they had the potential to be funny, but the delivery of the jokes left much to be desired. the animation could also use improvement, but im sure it will over time.
since you're planning to do this every week (that is the intention, right?) perhaps you would reconsider to every two weeks or something like that so there would be more time to improve the quality.
All in all though, it was a good attempt, better than anything ive attempted yet, and i will check in on future submissions to see how things turn out.
i hope that was helpful or informative, but whatever, its just my point of view.
RSQViper responds:
Well, I appreciate at least an informative review with the lower score.
In just about all Flash there is room for improvement and if you'll take a look at the lists of Flash to the Flash artists you'll see most don't have tons of experience.
That being said and taking alook at what we have here I have been overall extremely impressed with the new artists I've been working with and I constantly encourage them to striv to the next level each week.
Thanks for the detailed review. I'd give you a gold star if I had one. *
Ugh
All except the first had really really bland humor.
RSQViper responds:
At least you watched them all.