Meh.
It coulda been better. The song was pretty good, but it was really short, and in some parts, like when the brush came, the animation looked awful. But all in all I'll give you a 2/5.
Reviews for "At the Bus Stop"
look i just have to say.....
I think you could have made it a bit longer and just 1 question why would the blue guy bleed blue im not saying that to be offencive but its just somthing i think you could improve on so i gave it a low score so maby you could improve it on some aspects and then re-enter it :)
lordaiken responds:
becuse as everone nos blue people bleed blue blood, and green people bleed green. ITS TRUE ^_^
This just isn't that good.
Now this does have potential, as the idea itself was pretty neat, but aside from the concept itself, this movie is very lacking. First of all, these days unless you have an absolutely incredible stick themed flash, people are not going to like it. The animation was bad even as far as sticks go. Also, it was too short in my opinion, but mostly the graphics is this movie's weak point. Maybe spend some time working on the graphics, and you might have a decent cartoon.
lordaiken responds:
well this was ny first animation in a year! i didnt think it would get thro!!
omfg!
how in the hell was your file size so f'ing huge? was it because of the song? anyway that was pretty much shit. sry to say but it was. it was however a pretty good idea. if you can get better at animating, ( the stick dudes are fine, you dont need to change 'em) then you should remake it. definatly make it longer because that was the main reason why it was bad. no story. omfg a bus stop. omfg it killed them. rofl how funny. longer better and longer. the keys to success
lordaiken responds:
i didn't want to lose music quality :( i might remake it one day. hmm yea if you thought it was funny WHY DID YOU PUT 0 FOR HUMOR! lol
i wont protect it
Liked the music, but that is it. Too big in size and too short. So you get a straight up zero from me .... and to the previous guy ... u dont haven enough power to protect it from me ....
Your experience points gave you a voting power of 5.29 votes. Your blam and protection points gave you an additional 10% of your experience power, meaning that your total vote power was worth 5.81 votes!
lordaiken responds:
lol it got in! and why are you talking about "Your experience points" mate i don't care