Good Metal !
Very good song but the mixe is not well balance, you should rise up the volume of the guitar and drop it down a bit for the drum. And have you try to record 2 guitar on 4 tracks. I always mixe that way, to get a better overall guitar sounds. Like put one track pan 100% left and the other pan 100% right, and record 2 more track with 50% in each side with the same riff... That will make an heavier tone. So yeah overall good job.