No.
I liked the way different clocks displayed different times...
Anyway, good animation, good effort, you made clocks actually look good, but pl0x make a clockless animation on your next one ^^.
Reviews for "Project B - Episode II"
Athi responds:
well I'll finish this project and than we'll see what goes next ^^
Nice Animations
Pretty intense music, nice helicopter animation. Keep it up.
Athi responds:
Intense music ^^
That's the point XD
Improved
In general, this episode was much better than the first installation of the series. The graphics were just as sharp and it lasted longer.
By adding the length, I believe you have presented this portion of your plot much more effectively to the amateur audience. The sinister, epic music complemented the archetypal "evil headquarters" set much better than the music did in the first episode.
Again, though, there were a couple of things that were detrimental to the finished piece.
Maiden6 stated "The dialogue is at times grammatically incorrect, and it is quite distracting to me."
I cannot stress the importance of proper grammar (and spelling) when acting from or writing a script. It is one of the most fundamental elements in any type of presentation. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I'm starting to think "PALY" is some sort of inside joke. I don't think you would fail to notice the same mistake twice, let alone release it to the public.
The voice acting also had a few flaws. I found Pirate Clock's tone to be fairly well suited, but his expression was vague and lackluster in parts. On the contrary, Sage Clock's expression was fairly acute, but I found that the voice sounded too young for his white beard.
Finally, I thought the ending was well done. This project was better than the first, but still has room for improvement.
better than the first
Sup!
Nice continuation of the first one you made.
I just still don't understand whats an arrow doing when people talks?
What is the emotion of the clock-star at the end? He is sleepy or angry or half-clocked looking?
3d effects are cool, draws is ok and voice acting sound nice.
Keep on the good work!