well done
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Reviews for "LBV"
Well done!
Maybe has a little lack of originality, but it's well recorded&mixed and it's easy to listen. The epic atmosphere is very good.
The Transition after the intro
could use some work.
but this is pretty solid everywhere else!
There is lots of potential in this track, just keep at it!
you've almost got itt >,<
~Dj Sonik
JMcGoran responds:
Thanks for the review! :)
Aye needs a few teaks, not had a chance to implement them yet but hopefully soon, maybe with vox too! ta again!
Im a sucker for that chord progression.
When I heard it on the piano in the beginning I knew this would be good. As said before, the transition into the drums was rough. I loved the solo at the end.
Goo job!
5/5
8/10
(I know it doesnt add up, gotta work the system a bit, haha)
JMcGoran responds:
Thanks for the review! :)
Aye needs a few teaks, not had a chance to implement them yet but hopefully soon, maybe with vox too! ta again!
Really liked it
I really like the beggining, the piano chord progression really draws your attention and almost gives you this anticipating feeling.
I hope you dont mind me giving you a couple suggestions and I know you've already got this, but since the chord progression is litterally the same as Dream on and only slightly off on a couple BPM, it DOES sound like the chorus to Dream On... I understood completely where you come from, it's impossible to find a completely original chord progression, but since most of your song consists mostly of just the same chord progression just played by different instruments, it's hard to get away from it being literally a fairly close copy of Dream On, I simply suggest changing the melody a bit... make it more complex and it could possibly lead away from that similar sound. Or possibly change the litteral chord progression slightly, wether by it's notes or rythem. Even a change of instruments could change it from sounding like someone is bound to sing "dream on", that orchestral thing you got going I noticed really helped with making it it's own thing. Maybe change what the guitar is playing or maybe the drum feel because to me personally those feel closest to the similar sound of that chorus.
Please, don't fret, this is better than most of the crap that's in the audio portal these days.
JMcGoran responds:
See I don't mind CONSTRUCTIVE criticism! lol thanks for the comment and pointers, were useful :) aye, one thing i think it needs is vocals. This track was always written as more of a backing track to a vocal song, rather than a piece in it's own right, hence why it's fairly repetitive, verse chorus type feel without having a main melody throughout :P, so once they're done I think the piece will totally come into it's own. Hopefully have a new version up soonish.