Outstanding!
A brilliant first flash! Innovative and well put together. You clearly put lots of effort into this and the end product is something I wouldn't mind on the front page. You, my friend, have an excellent flash career ahead of you. Keep it going!
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For your first flash, that was a masterpiece! And I am a dark aura!
Job well done.
First off, I want to formally thank you for using my music in your submission. I appreciate that.
Now,
Overall, that was a decent flash. You actually used an idea that was original, insetead of another flagpole death/ cannon death blooper reel. The only problems that I had, although minor, would be that the sound was a bit distorted to me. And, the animation wasn't all that smooth. But, overall, you were indeed on the right track to making a decent Mario movie. I hope to see more movies from you.
Brilliant Sprite Movie
One of the main reasons I come to Newgrounds is for the Mario movies, and this is one of the many that have become my favourites.
10 graphics because they fit from the game and you haven't used any graphics from other games (apart from the Metroid scene) that look out of place.
10 style because of the Mario transformation, the camera movement, the story idea and such. I've seen another Mario movie where the main focus is a chase, but it is still completley different to this.
7 sound because even though the choice of music and effects were good most of the background music seemed to be low quality and distracted me from the movie (Especially the music used in the pipe bit) so you could improve that nezt time. (Might just be my computer though)
1 Violence because there was just Bowser falling into lava.
10 Humour, the ending was brilliant.
You should try more sprite movies. I prefer this to all your previous movies.
"nice!"
Im such a jerk for not giving a perfect score, but it has little to do with the clip. AWESOME JOB!<(that had to do with the clip ^.^')