Hmm
A little overboard below me, but welcome to newgrounds.
To start out positive: I like the intro of this song. It gives great potential to what the full song can be. It's both peacefull, and "headbangable".
However on the suggestion side: The song never built up and had a climax like I was expecting. You almost had it when you snare rolled @ 4:20, but it was still as same energy as it was before.
A punchier kick would be better as well.
Keep it up!!!
~Absolix
I agree with you man. Unlike the butthurt scrub below you, you at least explained the pros and cons. But honestly i don't want to say that this song deserves to be in the top 5 because it doesn't. The audio portal becomes a fury of fecal matter prior to the decision. It was luck that got my song up here. Alot of artists go unnoticed. They put there song up and little children like the little fetus below me 0 it to get their ratings up. But there really isnt anything you can do about it. I like making music whether its doo doo or not. I make music fo fun bra. But yea i gotta work on meh build ups. Ill get there eventually haha. Thanks for the constructive criticism. :)
Really Awesome
This rocks! I'm surprised im first to review. I think that more people should have seen this, its wonderful, theres something that makes it really awesome and i just can't quite put my finger on it. Very calming however also engaging at the same time.
Beautiful. I hope all your songs can be as inspiring as this.