Great Twice in One Day?
We get TWO??
Overload!!!
I wasn't expecting another today. Wow, this one was good, too. I like the beginning when they were trying to start the speeder in time as the zantiboan was coming. That well-done. Had me on the edge of my seat.
Some of the space battle was a lull, but overall very good.
And somehow, you had the story change again. We certainly can never guess what's going to happen.
Great job again! 5/5